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Seperation by ~Shawdow-Ghost:iconShawdow-Ghost:

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You Love Me.....
I Love You.....

But.....

Theres A Brink Wall
Seperating Me...
Froom You.....

You From Me.....

Everytime I Want You.....
Everytime I Want To Hold You
Craddle You In My Arms....
Feel Your Body Against Mine

I Get Sad
Sad Because This Brick Wall
Has The NERVE
To Seperate
Me From You....
You From Me

But As You Say
As I Obey
I Shall Wait
For This Wall To Fall

Everyday We Suffer
Without On Another
A Brick Falls From This Wall

Then I Pick It Up
And Cruch It
So It Won't Try To Stop Us Again

One Day The Bricks Will Be Gone....
The Bricks That Seperate

Me From You...
You From Me

And On That Day I Wall Have A Reason To Be Happy.....

Because I'm Finally With You....
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This Is One OF My Poems That I Made While I Was Depressed
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=Out-Of-Spite:iconOut-Of-Spite: Feb 27, 2008, 8:41:48 AM
It's beautiful :)

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~*~We Survive What We Can't Change~*~
:blackrose:Regrets are mistakes you don't learn from:blackrose:
Surrender to the Truth: [link]
Believe the Lie: [link]
~Shawdow-Ghost:iconShawdow-Ghost: Feb 27, 2008, 9:17:32 AM
Thank You...I have a few more

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Darkness Surrounds Us All....

Love In Distance.....Is Right Next Door....
=Out-Of-Spite:iconOut-Of-Spite: Feb 27, 2008, 10:19:39 AM
I can't wait

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~*~We Survive What We Can't Change~*~
:blackrose:Regrets are mistakes you don't learn from:blackrose:
Surrender to the Truth: [link]
Believe the Lie: [link]
~Shawdow-Ghost:iconShawdow-Ghost: Feb 27, 2008, 12:17:40 PM
I know...its only those three....I'm happier for now....but I'll be even happier when this wall falls

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Darkness Surrounds Us All....

Love In Distance.....Is Right Next Door....
~Heaven-Rose:iconHeaven-Rose: Feb 28, 2008, 4:19:41 PM
Well it is said some of the best work comes out of a depressed heart. I had an old friend who when he lost his father ( they were close ) he used to stay in his basement painting portraits for quite awhile. I saw one of them, very beautiful. This poem is full of love and heart. I am impressed. A brick wall is a perfect comparison to separation, it is tough to break through!
~Shawdow-Ghost:iconShawdow-Ghost: Feb 28, 2008, 4:47:09 PM
Ahh...yes tough to break....but one day it shall fall

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Darkness Surrounds Us All....

Love In Distance.....Is Right Next Door....
~PyroShadow18:iconPyroShadow18: May 25, 2008, 3:56:20 PM
This matches my mood at the moment. I like the poem. You won't be lonely when the wall comes down and you can be with the person you love.
It's a good feeling.:)

~Josh~

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